Thursday, 15 June 2017

Show not tell

WALT to show not tell our writing What I found challenging was using similes What I enjoyed was using the website We did this to put are show not tell writing on the website.


  1. hi tulsi i loved the way you put so many good similes i really think did awesome simile because you thourt about it really carefully and i also liked the dark sary music you picked and it was really cool
    to be btb qesiton marks if you want to when you do a qesiton

  2. Hi Tulsi its Liam
    I like the way your exiting intro
    It reminds me of my one
    to be btb could fix the mic

    Thanks liam :)


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