Monday, 5 December 2016

Tulsi pations

WALT: create an original pattern and describe it.
what I enjoyed was using the shapes. 
what was hard was to make the shapes in order.
next step is to make my shapes and t-shirts bigger 

Wednesday, 30 November 2016

The three little puppys

GOAL:I am learning to publish my work in lots of ways
What I enjoyed writing this was using my goal
What was hard was trying to use capital letters
next step is to use full stop all of the time.

Once there lived three little puppies called Nikau,Tulsi and Abbie who lived with their Mum.
One day there Mum howled “you puppys are too old to live here you need to make your own house but be careful of the big bad Hork”.

So Nikau,Tulsi and Abbie went off and Abbie saw a farm of straw she shouted “I will make my house here out of straw”.   Nikau and Tulsi said do you think It will be strong” “yes” cried Abbie. Then Nikau built his house out of sticks.
Tulsi came to a pile of bricks and said  “I will build my house here out of bricks”

Then the big bad Hork came to Abbie's house and screamed “ let me in let me in” not by the hair of my curly little tail” cried  
Abbie “then I'll Huff and I'll puff and I'll blow your house down”Explained the Hork. So he huffed and puffed and plew his house down so she ran to Nikau house  and cried “The big bad bad hork “ “oh” called Nikau.
Then the  big bad hork came to Nikau house and said “let me in let me in” shouted the hork “not by the hair of are curly little tails” they cried “then i'll huff and I'll puff  and I'll blow your house down” so he did and crash Nikau’s house fell down down down so they ran to Tulsi’s  house and cried “the big bad Hork” “oh no” Tulsi roared then the big bad hork came to Tulsi’s house and screamed “ let me in let me in”  not by the hair of are curly little tails “then i'll huff and i’ll puff and i’ll blow your house down” so he tried and tried but the house stayed up “ what” called the Hork. He then climbed up to the roof and the puppys said “oh no what do we do” “we will put a pot of hot water under the fire”  explained Tulsi then the Hork went down the chimney and fell in the pot of hot water and yelled  “ow ow” so he ran far far away.

Then they lived happily ever after and the big bad Hork never came back.

Friday, 18 November 2016

The god of earthquakes

What I enjoyed about writing this writing was using my goal . What I found challenging was trying to read the ideas off my plan.
Next time I will try to use my goal all the time.

WALT write speech marks.
Long ago underground Maui's Dad sleeped.  At night he moves around which causes  earthquakes.  Maui's dad wakes up because  he  hears noises. People don't care because he only makes aftershocks after a big earthquake. He makes a big one now and then that makes the earth shake “bang, bang, bang”!!    People get scared they get under something it is a  7.5 earthquake “it’s still going” cried Maui and his brothers.  Maui and his brothers said “please  father stop the earthquakes please”
Maui's dad didn't hear. “Please father stop” then he heard  him. He stopped and that's how earthquakes happen. From then on Maui's dad   tried not to move at night and day then they lived happily ever after .  Except for when his Dad gets an itch and has to move suddenly!

Friday, 11 November 2016

Maui and the Sun Animation

WALT animate a part of a story that we have written.
I enjoyed making this was remembering the Maui and the sun story What I found challenging was trying to make the people and sun move.

Tuesday, 25 October 2016

diggers and planters

GOAL structure of a plant
I enjoyed doing this DLO because it was fun writing the ideas what I found challenging was that is was hard to find a good picture. Maybe next time I could do more ideas.

Thursday, 20 October 2016

Explanation - why our school is special

GOAL is to use similes,alliteration,onomatopoeia what I found challenging was I found it hard to concentrate with all the noise what i found fun I found was writing ideas my next step is to use capital letters for places.

Friday, 14 October 2016

My Holiday Recount

GOAL I am learning to use capital  letters and full stops for sentences all of the time.
what I enjoyed writing this was using my GOAL
what I found challenging was trying to remember ideas
next step is to put only one space in between words. 

Thursday, 22 September 2016

Tulsi camp recount

WALT :recount our camp experiences
I enjoyed writing this because I liked when I write about the Franz Josef walk because it was fun. what I found challenging was that it was fun to try to remember some ideas. To be BTB I could add different Sentence starters
GOAL  To use Capital letters for people and places correctly. On Thursday room 5 had the Fox Glacier camp. First I got to school at 7.30 and went to the meeting. Next we went to  Ross for a 15-minute break. Then we went to Okarito and did the walk there we looked at the view at the top of the walk it was a really beautiful view. Next we went to Franz Josef  and went to the information center then we  did the 3-hour walk it was fun because we got to drink the water but it was tiring.  After that we went to Fox Glacier then had dinner at the place we were staying at we had home made burgers they were beautiful. Then we had a disco it was fun after that we had to go to bed. Finally we had breakfast and got ready to go to the Kiwi Center.  Then we went to the Kiwi Center at 11.45 it was fun because we got to see a Rowi kiwi. After that we went to the hot pools it was so nice and relaxing I loved it.

Monday, 19 September 2016

Glacier camp

                        WALT  share our camp experiences
             I enjoyed when I thought about the time when the boy with black her came up to me and        called "good job"  
It was challenging when people were distracting me a lot.
To make my work BTB I need to add capital I in my writing. 


Friday, 26 August 2016

Area of the picnic table

Olympic Moment in time


WALT: Describe a moment in time in detail.

I was in the 2016 Rio Olympics. Part way through the race Abby from the USA and I fell over luckily I wasn’t hurt too bad but Abby had twisted her knee. Abby helped me up and said “we need to finish this race”.   So together we jogged together to finished the race and somehow we got in the final.
When i fell over i felt sad and my body screamed out with pain.  I wondered how did I  finish the race with scratches and bruises.